13-12-2022, 12:30 AM
Dear Aisshu
The last couple of updates were terrific. I was surprised to see 'water games' in such erotic manner in Tamil Stories. Kudos.
One small request, let Hari or Atish dont proceed more than few glances and light flirting with Nithya. Please do not degrade the character for the sake of story. All characters in the story are truly nice people who were forced in illicit relations due to circumstances. Nithya was in the most precarious situation due to child issue and her relationship with Raj is more emotional than erotic.
Also, there is one small gap - which I believe you have left deliberately for later use. Initially Atish used a phone on Selvam's name to start flirting with Subha and she too started participating in it. The blind flirt was forgotten by Subha once her relationship with Atish progressed up. Will she found out that she falling for Atish is not spontaneous as she thinks but a carefully scripted ploy by her son?
Thanks
The last couple of updates were terrific. I was surprised to see 'water games' in such erotic manner in Tamil Stories. Kudos.
One small request, let Hari or Atish dont proceed more than few glances and light flirting with Nithya. Please do not degrade the character for the sake of story. All characters in the story are truly nice people who were forced in illicit relations due to circumstances. Nithya was in the most precarious situation due to child issue and her relationship with Raj is more emotional than erotic.
Also, there is one small gap - which I believe you have left deliberately for later use. Initially Atish used a phone on Selvam's name to start flirting with Subha and she too started participating in it. The blind flirt was forgotten by Subha once her relationship with Atish progressed up. Will she found out that she falling for Atish is not spontaneous as she thinks but a carefully scripted ploy by her son?
Thanks
Bineesh!
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