10-09-2022, 11:53 PM
(07-09-2022, 12:31 PM)manasi Wrote: Human actions are mainly driven by compulsion, impulse, habit or motive.
According to Greek philosopher Aristotle there are Seven Causes of Human Action which help us understanding human behaviours.I have made some efforts to understand both our protagonists from above angles. Whereas Krish is mostly driven by passion and desire, for Meera it could be habit. Krish is unnaturally being forced to become willing cuckold. But truth be told, I am unable to fit Meera anywhere mainly due to her unconventional, uncharacteristic, contradictory unreal behaviours. Sometimes she proves herself as nympho against at some points she had shown mental as well as physical strength to prove otherwise. I feel, Meera is forced to convert as a sadist nympho against her nature established in part-I . Could it be a flaw in her characterization?
- Chance. ...
- Nature. ...
- Compulsion. ...
- Habit. ...
- Reasoning. ...
- Passion. ...
- Desire.
The fact pleasures me most is that a great no of readers are looking for a great story line beyond sex. Sex is definitely important but not at the expense of great storyline.
What pains me more in this update is character Krish foolish odd behaviour. Against knowledge of modern equipment’s on eavesdropping (He has direct experience of their utilization), Krish decides for drilling hole in bedroom door panels! I think, it is made on purpose to expand the story. He could easily go for recording cameras. Cleverly involved Piyush character can be utilised to turn the storyline in any directions. He could be a reformer or a spoiler depending on choice of ending. And another Ananya has taken birth in form of Nidhi.
One interesting observation! People involved in car accidents decide the course of events in Meera-Krish life. However, they are never involved in any serious car accidents injuring themselves.
manasi
Totally ageee with you !
I stopped reading the story , I just read your comments and two other fellows ! And understand what’s happening!
It’s hurting the way story is going on !
It looks likes Meera is a born slut and whore ( as you said nympho) !
She doesn’t care about her love and her marriage anymore !
She want sex badly and it’s no wrong as every lady need sex and desire !
But this story I was hoping it was between Krsih n Meera both enjoy life with adventure ( include cuck and sex together) but look like she needs only sex doesn’t matter who fuck her !
The story gone long back ! It’s now become a slut story/whore story!
Meera now trying hard to make krish cuck fully ! So that she can enjoy her sex life with others!
I am really disappointed!
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