25-07-2022, 11:17 AM
(25-07-2022, 06:25 AM)Steven Rajaa Wrote: Nice start, but leave space between each line of conversation for better readability. Avoid writing hindi in between. This is english forum and people knowing english only come here.
Yes , thank you for your feedback , shall try to incorporate the space part . Yes ,writing both in Hindi and English is actually time consuming and sometimes breaks the flow of narration for the me too as a writer, hence I am fine with that. Let me get some more inputs on this and I shall do as per feedback.
Anyways appreciated you comments.