Adultery The Defeat of Poroma

[Devilmaycry]

The original story is a horror story. It is in the very first chapter. Take the sexual fantasy, the stimulation, the sex game, the ambience, everything away. What else is there? A stubborn woman. A woman who likes to argue and challenge. The horror, the nightmare, is born from his frustration with his argumentative wife. That is the heart of the story, I believe. Everything else is there to hide it. 
 
The husband's biggest fear is that the man who will steal his wife away is the one who will finally make her stop arguing.


If you, as a writer, want to make a change, you need to make the husband win several predictions about some life-changing event. 'I told you so', kind of.If she is arguing with her husband, she lacks faith in him, his competence, and his intelligence.

Either that or she is an innately disagreeable person.Disagreeableness is an indicator of promiscuity in a romantic relationship. 

Promiscuity, divorce etc., is predicted by Extrovertism (not always), Openness to experience, Neuroticism(primarily in women), low level of conscientiousness and some darker traits like -Narcissism, Psychopathy and Machiavellianism.

Your Poroma is Machiavellian. So I don't know. I will look forward to your solution.

Also, don't mind my rant; my own story got deleted. So yeah, I thought, let's crash some fellow author's party and ruin his buzz.

P.S. Poroma at her core is a feminist. Keep that in mind, also. I am not saying that in a negative sense. Just an observation.