Adultery The Turbaned Negro (Completed)

[Mintu08]

Mintu ji.. first of all.. wonderful story.. though we can say.. known subject.. by your treatment is totally different and fantastic.. slowly ang gradually.. now moving or rather near towards the final penetration of black into white.. Jason and Kavita.. bit conservative on my thought process.. as story moving ahead as per Jason's way.. he is playing the game.. and marching towards winning the game.. but if you have written it with bit even level-playing with both the characters and moving towards the ultimate goal.. both fall with each other with natural incedents happens around them.. but it's your story and we are enjoying it fully.. with your each characters..

Jason and Kavita are the main but what I feel.. may be in future.. Kavita's elder daughter Asha will also go towards Jason may be before Rahul.. and the other teacher who teases Kavita.. she will also come to Jason.. I don't know about Mintoo ji's mind-game but it's my just gut-feeling.. let's see.. what will come..

Thank you for the kind words.

Suspicions of Destiny! Let's see.