17-06-2022, 12:06 AM
(11-06-2022, 02:38 PM)abcturbine Wrote: you have lot of potential.......
no need to rush....
take your time and continue.....
(11-06-2022, 11:12 PM)shdas Wrote: Thanks for taking feedback in right spirit .... aap apni peronal life ka dhyan rakhey and jab time miley tab aram se likhey ..like i said yeh story bahut acchi hain and aap jab bhi likhege hum jaise readers phir connect ho jayenge ..
See these comments, your readers are with you, take your time and when your ready return but don’t finish so soon.