Adultery The Defeat of Poroma

[Realman12]

You have started one very difficult task.

It appears, you are more interested to establish the defeat of Parama. Originally, Ranjeet was forcefully converted into cuckold. Very clearly, you have taken some deviation. Even in drunken state of mind, he is able to identify the cheating as well as vested interest of his so called friends. He is able to logically argue in his favour not to break open Rahul's house considering consequences.

Ranjeet becoming cuckold implies win of Parama. Character of Ranjeet is already built against the theme of cuckoldary. Only hope, there won't be a sudden degradation in his character.

When Parama faces a character not to be mend as cuckold, she would face the reality. Because, Rahul is only interested in flesh. Responsibility and lust are two mutually opposite characteristics.

Eagerly waiting for defeat of Parama in true sense. It would be interesting to see how you mend the characters to achieve your goal.

Very very much thank you Manasi, would like to have you as a buddy in this group. Very nice that finally my thread could get your attention! I have been a fan of your writing in this forum! Surely I appreciate your ideas and opinions, and would try to appreciate your valuable opinion and suggestions. Also would request you to please kindly finish your sequel to The Unwanted houseguest, a tribute. We are all very eager to know finally with whom Manu have settled. Whether Kavita returns with a new identity since the wife of Manu speaks about her in a third person, whether she is Jaya seperated from her husband due to some new development, or whether she is Gowri? Or some one else? If she is not Kavita then finally what happened to her?