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Adultery Anita Singh Story of a seductive housewife by seansean007 (incomplete)
I appreciate your hardwork regarding this story, but still don't know which half of story fratures this update. I would like to suggest if you want to keep this part as is in story , you must put this in the last winding part of story because Anita's character is not like this where 4 men can seduce her and gangbang her .. this is not the essence of her character..she must be seduced by jeetu and hariya or one more character at least..but not more than that...Try to focus more on night quick sex, cheating talks, whatsapp chats etc ... You can also add some more parallel scenes to it..like car ride with jeetu . And other things like this .. where she discovers other extra material affairs of other woman or professionals etc..
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RE: Anita Singh Story of a seductive housewife by seansean007 (incomplete) - by Hellybelly - 23-03-2022, 08:30 AM



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