29-12-2021, 10:48 PM
(29-12-2021, 05:33 PM)Yampag Wrote: Bahot khoob.. Ajanbhai.. Story par achchhi pakad banake rakhi hai.. dhire dhire aage badh rahe ho.. aue ye hi aapki sabse badi khoobi hai.. fatafat sex karavane se jyada.. kaamuk baatchit aur foreplay gehri asar chhodta hai.. aur aap usme maahir ho.. as a reader we feel great erotism with such playful events..
Aur bich me yeh name change ka chakkar kaha se aa gaya.. are bhailog what is there in a name.. are yeh sachhi kahani thodi hai.. aur har ek M-class character thodi hai isme.. sab type ke characters aate jaate rahenge.. aap story ka mazaa lo.. aur aage badho.. haa jahaa pe jyadaa aur sirf ***** men aur ***** woman par hi focuss karke likhate hai vahaa mai bhi asahaj mehsus karta hu.. vahaa pe ham kahe sakte hai ki.. yeh theek nahi lag rahaa..
Baaki writers ko freedom do yaaro.. yeh log ek to free mai likhate hai.. unka bahot saraa time invest karte hai.. aur hame ajeeb se khooshi dete hai.. to appreciate bhi kijiye.. aur kuchh theek na lage to hum unko keh bhi sakte hai in a proper and appropriate way.. or bhailog buraa mat mannaa.. aao.. padho.. enjoy karo.. aur likh sakte ho to woh bhi try Karo..
Waiting for next update.. yeh raat abhi lambi hai...
Thankyou so much yampag bro...apke detail review ka besabri se intezar rahta hai......or raha baat naam change ka toh mene ye isliye kiya kyoki mai nai chahtaa ki mere thread par log dharam ke naam par kuch kahe.....mai sabse pehle ek bhartiya hu or sabhi dharmo ki dil se izzat karta hu...or aapne sahi kaha ki naam se kuch nahi hota ....aaplog aslam ke update ko dhyaan se padhiyega to aaplog notice kiye honge ki maine dharam se related koi bhi faaltu element nahi daala hai ......nahi god ka naam liya nahi dick ka or na hi relegion ka ....fir bhi yaaha mansikta aisi hai logo ki ki qa kahe.....khair naam chahe kuch bhi ho mai apne seduction level best rakhunga story mai........
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