01-05-2019, 08:17 PM
foogy -
Quick comments:
taking her mind away to some distant world has its own appeal in terms of the depths of sinking down.
However, the real exciting parts of this story had been the constant inner struggle of needs/desires/moralities which goes back and forth.
One reason when she went back to the city and her mind restored to the way it was and how she was drawn back was interesting.
It somehow seems that the story is towards coming to a close which I hope is not, as the possibilities left to be explored is way too many .. hoping to see the next update soon. Aurelius is a great writer, however sometimes he does end stories with lot to be desired. I am not holding that against, its the prerogative of the author and I respect that.
Quick comments:
taking her mind away to some distant world has its own appeal in terms of the depths of sinking down.
However, the real exciting parts of this story had been the constant inner struggle of needs/desires/moralities which goes back and forth.
One reason when she went back to the city and her mind restored to the way it was and how she was drawn back was interesting.
It somehow seems that the story is towards coming to a close which I hope is not, as the possibilities left to be explored is way too many .. hoping to see the next update soon. Aurelius is a great writer, however sometimes he does end stories with lot to be desired. I am not holding that against, its the prerogative of the author and I respect that.
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