05-12-2021, 09:10 PM
very nice story so well written
really you are great writer, your writing skill is hidden talent now being exposed here.
the way you carried it is super and the ending is also really heart touching, after so much of expression about love and care, the pain of departing is very nice. at last moment call history being deleted is token of love towards each other and decided not to re-enter in each others lives
if you had changed the end like happy ending, it would be like Indian films
keep writing and entertaining
thanks for your both stories
this one as well my story
really you are great writer, your writing skill is hidden talent now being exposed here.
the way you carried it is super and the ending is also really heart touching, after so much of expression about love and care, the pain of departing is very nice. at last moment call history being deleted is token of love towards each other and decided not to re-enter in each others lives
if you had changed the end like happy ending, it would be like Indian films
keep writing and entertaining
thanks for your both stories
this one as well my story