25-11-2021, 08:53 PM
(This post was last modified: 25-11-2021, 08:53 PM by raja shri. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Bhai sorry for late review pr.....aisa na kaho ki story kisi ko pasand nhi aa rahi ye is forum ki best story me se ek hai....so ye think mat kro ki story kisi ko pasand nhi aa rhi hai ....and sory bdiya ja rhi hai.....pr ye brijmohan or Birju ka scen kuch jyada nhi keech raha ....I mean jyada lamba ho gya kyuki abhi kahani past me chl rhi hai...or past me vandana ne 14 din me kya kiya ye btaya jayega ....pr abhi to ek raat hi complete nhi hui ....uske baad 13 din bhi hai ....aisa nhi hai maza nhi aa raha pr aisa lag raha hai isse tum thoda keech rahe ho ....bura laga to sorry brother.....pr mujhe aisa lg rha hai ......
And waiting for next update....
And waiting for next update....