Adultery Indian Wife and the Nukkad Guys by shiprat
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bdrew86-

Woowwwww....

Excellent Work Shipra...You've toppedy your work.

Thanks for mentioning me in the first line of your story.

You story is long but it is also direct. The build up isn't too big like mine which keeps the reader interested.

I love the story and I hope that you continue with it. However, I also hope that you don't give into pressure by members to carry on and dilute the story. This has made many promising stories boring.

Good Luck.

XoXo

Bdrew86
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RE: Indian Wife and the Nukkad Guys by shiprat - by Ramesh_Rocky - 30-04-2019, 01:47 PM



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