24-11-2021, 12:43 PM
(24-11-2021, 08:53 AM)Ajanmol Wrote: Thankyou for ur honest review bhai....nd so sorry ....mai koshis karunga wapas se purane jaisa update kar saku....bt mujhe lagta hai kisi ko ab story mai intrest nahi hai ....... mai dil se chahta hu ki log mujhe suggest kare ....khair i will try ny best ......
Bhai mere suggestions me to best ye hai ki ye office ka scene khatm krke jald hi...brij ko chennai bhejo aap...aur wapas se bus jaisa incident karao vandana ke sath aur saath hi hariya ko wapas lao game me taki wo kuch majburi ya apni kuch majburi jaisa kahani suna kar convince kare vandana ko aur wapas apne maqsad ki taraf badhe.. koi b character bhukha na jaaye story ka.Hariya kuch aisa btaye ki majburi me kiya usne aur sympathy gain kr wapas utre kahani me.