Misc. Erotica BASSSSS.. KARO ..(NAMRATA ek PAHELI)

[Anvesharonny]

 Brother aapke jaisa reader maine ab tak nahi dekha        ( honestly speaking )    thanks for your suggestions , response , review, support 

 and apko boht sare plot Holes milenge agar aap story vapis read kar rahe honge toh , because this is my first story and jab start kiya tha toh koi Idea nahi tha bas joh man ko accha lagta aur likhne me maja ata voh likh deta tha but pata nahi tha ye story ko itne bade margine me likhunga 

Actually maine starting ke kuch update main namrta ke mom ko as a madhuri dixit imagine kiya tha apko pics bhi milenge madhuri ke but later voh character mujhe boht glamourous imagine hone laga that's y maine bad me simple name rakh diya 


Thank you once again , keep supporting

Actually we should thank you for writing such brilliant erotica,it's best erotica I have read on xossipy.
Haa thode plot holes Hain but I am not concerned with it Maine isaliye aapko bataya ke aap post edit karake name change karwa sakte ho taaki ye erotica perfect ho.Aur lift scene main bhi Birju aur savla 1-2 jagah interchange hua hain.

Haa aur Suchita ke baare main apane right decision liya madhuri ka character jyada glamorous hota.Aur main samaz sakta hoon ek character ko imagine karake story likhana aur usase related image dhundana kitna difficult Hain hats off to you for doing such job perfectly.

Just want to ask you which celebrity you see as Namrata??you started with Arya ambekar then preksha raina,Priyanka Jain etc etc.