Fantasy Jaya - A Lonely Wife's Adventures

[Desmond Miles]

Bro, not to be rude, but everything was perfect until this conversation happened.. Like it came out of nowhere..

"FIL: No dear, I insist, let Mani continue the message, you will feel relaxed….. Don’t send him soon now…..
Jaya: Dad please…… it’s really ok…..
FIL: No Jaya, I insist, and not just today, I will ask Mani to do it daily….., without fail…..
Jaya was dumbstruck, “everyday” ….., she so wanted to deny it, but her FIL kept insisting on Mani continue to give her a message…..
FIL: Mani son, please continue and don’t let her stop you….., and promise me, you will take of Jaya like this every day…..
Mani: Sure uncle, please don’t worry, I will take full care of Miss…..,
FIL: OK then Jaya, I will go and sleep for some time…… Mani you close the door and give her a good message……
Mani Ok Uncle…… You take rest, I will take care of Jaya…."

Why this type of dumb behavior from her FIL? He was just before a good person and caring. And its not likely hia character to do something like this to his DIL with a servant (that too a teenage boy). No one will insist a thing like that in normal circumstances.

Anyway, you know how to write and excite us.. So not complaining, but please try to avoid these type of rushed/forced bits.. The concept of this story is new and fresh.. So when cliché elements comes in it, may get bit boring, but not overall.. Keep going, bro