nri alone housewife trapped by low class cheap worker by kayasareelover1

[sarit11]

Kaambholo
kayasareelover1
U have developed the plot verywell...it is not only fucking..u erotically added conversation in it..in erotic story which is most important. but in last update u have not created that feeling of first ejaculation in nidhi,,coz she was gone into sleep..aage bhi bahut jaldi mat karna..dhire dhire kuchh naya karte aage badhana, ek mera suggestion tha ki aap ne jo mobile se record karne ka idea dala hai wo mujhe thik nahi laga..kyoki ye blackmailing karega..bt u just creat such situation and make them fuck..blackmailing se easy trap ho jata hai aur story me fir kuch nayapan nahi lagata...bas aap kuchh aisa plot creat karo ki tadap dono taraf se ho..ek ko chodane ki dusre ko chudwane ki...baki story aap ki hai..jaisa aap ko thik lage...

aur ek bat..starting me aapne ek kale til ka jikra kiya tha..wo shayad ek bar hi chata hai..fir puri fucking me wo kahi nahi aayaa..