01-07-2021, 02:19 AM
Welcome back DS bro!!
Though this is just a story, it long back moved from being just another erotic story to people confronting their conscience.
Hard to digest the happenings from Malar's end. Why should she sacrifice ? What rights does Raj have now after what he has done ? He should never have married Malar in first place if his heart still beats for Kamini.
Malar would have had a happy life with Vinay and Raj took her away from him through his tactics.
Vinay is more cleaner now compared to Raj.
We are at a stage where all the Heroes of your Trilogy are becoming Villains and Villains are becoming heroes.
Only one Unchanged angel. That is Nisha.
This is a huge transition in your writing style bro. Starting with pure eroticism to emotional roller coaster, this is simply exceptional writing
Though this is just a story, it long back moved from being just another erotic story to people confronting their conscience.
Hard to digest the happenings from Malar's end. Why should she sacrifice ? What rights does Raj have now after what he has done ? He should never have married Malar in first place if his heart still beats for Kamini.
Malar would have had a happy life with Vinay and Raj took her away from him through his tactics.
Vinay is more cleaner now compared to Raj.
We are at a stage where all the Heroes of your Trilogy are becoming Villains and Villains are becoming heroes.
Only one Unchanged angel. That is Nisha.
This is a huge transition in your writing style bro. Starting with pure eroticism to emotional roller coaster, this is simply exceptional writing