30-06-2021, 12:39 AM
That's awesome awesome writing Sammie Bro. I kinda am getting into the patience game because I'm liking this slow play better than fast updated shit that could only be momentary pleasure. Many writers do that where they start a story, write something kinky and get into action with build up that's not arousing after one or 2 reads.
A good erotic story should arouse whenever you read it and also maintain logic so that it could be connected better. This does just that.
Just a recommendation, if you can read Tamil, Catch up with Thirumbudi Poovai Vaikanum by NV where he has created an Universe of characters.
I see you to be someone who can evolve into something similar in the future.
A good erotic story should arouse whenever you read it and also maintain logic so that it could be connected better. This does just that.
Just a recommendation, if you can read Tamil, Catch up with Thirumbudi Poovai Vaikanum by NV where he has created an Universe of characters.
I see you to be someone who can evolve into something similar in the future.
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