03-05-2021, 11:41 AM
(03-05-2021, 08:34 AM)neel191298 Wrote:
Anmol bhai aapka story ka ek speciality hain aap ek ek scene ko bhot detail mein, bhot hi bariki se likte hain....
Vandana ki har ek pal ki aise description bhot hi lajawab hain.....
Iska ek negative side bhi ho sakta hain, ki kisi kisi reader ko yeh zada lengthy lag sakta hain...
I have just said my opinion....
You are doing a great job...Thank you so much... Likes and Reps added...
Aage bhi vandana ki jhanda gaarte jao....
Thankyou neel bro...or sex scene ko mai acche se likhna chahta hu or haa ye lengthy hai bt story ka pehla sex jaldbazi mai mujhe sahi ni laga....