11-03-2021, 08:01 PM
(11-03-2021, 06:39 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Bhai thanks for the comment...yeh story mai us hisab se likh raha hu jaise mujhko pasand hai or rahi baat people ke intrest ki to jab mujhe lagega ki ab 1 bhi person ko intrest nahi hai tab mai end kar doonga last chaptter deke....or bhai ladki ke chudne se hi intrest khatam or badhta nahi hai yeh bas apna apna nazariya hai....kisi ko italian food pasand aati hai to kisi ko chinese bt jab joro ki bhook lagti hai to yeh nahi dekhta ki saamne kon si hai jo mila usi par toot padte hai.....wese hi story bhi hoti hai jaroori nahi ki chudai hone ke baad hi story story lage....maine bhut si story aise padhi hai jisme shuru se lekar ant tak chudai na hui ho.....lekin log phir bhi padhte hai or rahi baat tumhare thread ke choodne se to bhai mai tumhare liye apna plot change nahi kar sakta....or mai kisi ko force bhi nahi kar raha ki meri story padho ya mt padho....kon sa mujhe yha reward milna hai.....
Bhai aap kahani pe concentrate kijiye, in sab mei nahi...bahit sahi ja rahe ho aap
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