04-03-2021, 11:54 PM
(04-03-2021, 10:51 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Kya aaplogo ko sahi mai maza aaraha hai ya boring lag rahi hai story...kyoki comment to sirf 3 se 4 logo ki hi aate hai...agar ni pasand aa rahi update to aap bata sakte hai jaroori nahi ki acche hi comment karne hai ....any ways bhut mehnat lagti hai story likhne mai kam se kam jo registered user padhte hai wohi feedback de diya kare....
Ajanmol bhai....
just became a registered user just to reply here
Please do not be demotivated by less comments or negative ones, what you are writing here is a master piece of highest quality.
Without doubt this is one of the best erotica I have ever come across and belongs in the class of stories of legends like Aurelius1982, bdrew86....
Please continue the story and with your own pace...
Just some suggestions for future updates.... do not turn Vandana into an easy slut but keep the mischievous seductress alive.... Men should drool just by thinking of her in their fantasies.... forbidden fruit is always exiting to taste....but the fruit should remain forbidden and there should be some tasting
Love your work and I wish this thread crosses 1000 pages
Eagerly waiting for the next update....
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