Misc. Erotica BASSSSS.. KARO ..(NAMRATA ek PAHELI)

[Royalkingfire]

And talking about future prospect of the story I will share what I think what's going to happen in the story.
In my opinion Namu is not sweet,sansakri  Jo wo dikhati Hain.Wo apani pyas buzane Ke Liye sharfi hone ka Nayak karake logo ko attract karake apani kamvasana buzati Hain.
She all ready lost her virginity but how and to whom she have lost the virginity it's interesting point. Because it was quite evident that Mishra didn't took her virginity.So then question arises who took her virginity??
I hope it happen between Her school-college duration and that person can be school peon,Her tution teacher or someone else that person should be middle aged one like birju,savala.
And I hope you will  describe her seduction in details like her first kiss,first touch on her boobs by a men etc etc.
And talking about suchita I have all ready predicted that namrata might not be the daughter of Sanjay that's why he conspired with birju to seduce her.
Pehla prediction to sahi nikala ab dekhate Hain aage Kya hota Hain??
Next part of the story is about secret behind namrata's birth but I hope you also write how namrata lost her virginity?! After all namrata is the heroine of the story so focus should be on namrata.
Eagerly waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank you so much my brother for your honest feedback . Yes i accept your opinion on Suchita some readers really like Suchita-bhikari theme and kuch logo ko nahi connect huva... because of realistic theme


But my writing basically depends on realistic thing and that time main kuch alag karna chahta tha . 


I know NAMRATA is heroine of story . But as a  writer i like suchita's character . Because SUCHITA ko likhne main ek alag he maja aata hain.



And as a reader i know value and importance , emotions of NAMRATA's character.


Ab jyada kuch na bolte huve aapke iss comment ke liye dil se thank you . 



Aur aise he suggestions and feedback dete rahiye . Because aapke comments se samjta hain ki story kaha tar samjhi hain aur main jo likh raha hu uska value ho raha hain ya nahi 



Once again thank you so much