16-02-2021, 03:08 PM
Another great update. This time we saw how little mistakes set the foundation of big disasters. Yes, Chai was wrong when he asked THAT question to Sam and he got the well deserved SLAP from Sam. But, we all know the future. It's time to fill the portion between past and future.
I am still confident that Sam - Chai will change their future and will not follow Gau-Kaju disaster life. David and Rana are prime suspects who may turn Dutiful Wife into a Exhibitionist woman. BUT, as a reader, I think you are showing these 3 people to divert attention from REAL person. I don't know who is REAL ####, but I think he is neither Rana or David. These 2 bastards can easily destroy Chai-Sam life, but as we saw, #### never fucked her. I feel like he is saving Sam from people like David and Rana. Well, those are my assumptions.
LONDON LUND : I laughed so hard, when I read this. I really like the way you describe your characters. "Chutiya Chai", "Demanding David", "LONDON LUND".. Great..
I am still confident that Sam - Chai will change their future and will not follow Gau-Kaju disaster life. David and Rana are prime suspects who may turn Dutiful Wife into a Exhibitionist woman. BUT, as a reader, I think you are showing these 3 people to divert attention from REAL person. I don't know who is REAL ####, but I think he is neither Rana or David. These 2 bastards can easily destroy Chai-Sam life, but as we saw, #### never fucked her. I feel like he is saving Sam from people like David and Rana. Well, those are my assumptions.
LONDON LUND : I laughed so hard, when I read this. I really like the way you describe your characters. "Chutiya Chai", "Demanding David", "LONDON LUND".. Great..
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