Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III (Completed)

[critic_honest]

It feel great when I log in to this site and see somebody has written a long paragraph to me. And if the paragraph is about someone's honest review about my story (let it be good or bad), then I feel even greater. I mean to say I'm not at all offended by your views.
I have a few thoughts to defend my style of writing. It is not something I prepared as a reply to your questions. It is rather my own justification for how I write the story the way it is.
1. About the chapter ending: 
It is true that I like to end the chapters on a high. I want my readers to be eager to read the next chapter.
I know this is basically an erotic story but without a plot that captures the reader's attention you can't have a great sex scene. So I have to build the story without losing the erotic nature of the story. I achieve this by giving hints about where the story is heading to. These hints are everywhere. But the hint that comes at the end of every chapter is the one that makes you desperate. 
In the previous chapter, I can tell you of a few hints that I could strategically end the chapter.

i) When Tejas told Krish this:
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iv) Fourth hint is where I actually ended the chapter.

The first three hints did not bother you at the time of reading because you didn't have to stop there; you were reading on. But at the fourth hint, the chapter came to an end. That's why this hint comes as jolt. When this last hint is erotic in nature, like my other friend suggested, it feels like KLPD.

My style of writing is developed on an idea that the sexual encounter in an erotic story has to happen in the reader's head. No matter what I write or how long I explain about Desai having sex with Ananya, if the reader fails to imagine this scene in his head, my writing is of no use. And if the reader is able to ejaculate thinking about it without having read a single line, then that's my story's success. If you're watching a porn and suddenly you think it's Desai fucking Ananya, then that's my story's success. If you are having sex with your wife/gf and you begins to imagine you're Desai and you're fucking Ananya, then that's my story's success.

I'm not killing your view with my justification. I understand that some of the readers are frustrated due to my habit of hanging it in the middle. But like I said, such plot points and everywhere, and I have to end the chapter in some way that captures your attention the most. I think the problem would have been solved if I were able to post the chapters every two days. It's a big IF.

2. About being hungry about views:
I don't like to agree with this, but I would be lying if I disagreed. I'm hungry for views and comments. What else am I writing here for? But I have to disagree that I manipulated my readers for it. I had posted the preface two months earlier than starting this story but it wasn't aimed at gathering views and comments even before starting the story. Since I finished my last story NODAS readers have been regularly asking me about the next one. When I revealed my plan to write Knowing...-III, they began urging me to start posting. I was getting so many private messages. I also noticed that this new site was getting a lot of old stories but very less new stories. If that trend continued, it would again be trouble for the site. So I decided to officially announce the arrival of the story by writing a preface. It was not meant to gather comments from readers; but to generate interest in other writers to write new stories. I don't know if I succeeded in that. 
I had a couple of completed chapters only in my hand when I posted the preface. That's why I kept the readers waiting for two months - to have at least ten chapters completed. But as people began to be more frustrated, I was forced to start the story. If I have a number of chapters completed, then I can keep writing peacefully. As I've noticed, it takes me one week to finish one chapter. Some chapters can take even longer than that. It's not very easy. It's not deliberately delayed.

I'm not offended, my friend. I'm actually thankful that you shared your views. I gave this long reply because I know many others too have the same views.

To other friends, you don't have to criticise the criticism unless it's about abusing/threatening/bullying. As long as it's healthy sharing of views (let it be bad review or good reviews), they should be welcomed. Everyone's views are important. Everyone's free here to share them.

Thanks for reading my story. Thanks for reading this reply too.
Love.
Krish.

Thank you for replying and clarifying.
I know you are not some immature writer who would get offended like that and believe me its a quality a writer must have. You have patience and you turn every critic into a friend.

I know a author like you doesn't have to do tricks to gather views as the views will eventually follow. Your writing and logical imagination is a living proof of that. 
But thanks for clarifying, it was indeed needed to eliminate doubts  ....