Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III (Completed)

[Sagar s]

See everyone knows that you are one hell of an exceptional & amazing writer but a few things I really wish to mention about your writing trend, Hopefully you'll take them in a positive manner.


1) I have always felt that you intentionally end each and every update with the content for which the reader came to read . Seems as if you want the reader to keep craving and force him to desperately wait for next update and when the next update comes, you again do the same thing.
let me try to explain ......
It's like, a reader reading your story is excited and is getting horny reading the update and slowly he is reaching to the point where he actualy wants to ejaculate as its getting too erotic but he is not able to climax and is left with utmost disappointment at the end of the update..You know why ????? because you don't let him ejaculate as you will always end the update at the very exact moment which he actually craved to read.
        For instance you finished the last update writing 5-6 lines about Desai and Krish finding Ananya in Desai's bed. It was the part which reader wanted to read the most but you purposely ended it there. You gave petty details in the starting 90% of the update and strategically ended it exactly at the point which reader wanted the most . I assume just to keep reader hanging and tied to the story that he will have to keep waiting for next update and trust me the next update will also be the same.The start of the update will be beat around the bush (important but not exciting)and last few lines will be ones where you will end it and again the reader will be left craving. ( I am not saying at all that the starting content is irrelevant in any way , I know it is what which is  making the story but the way you end the update is really upsetting). Would it really lessen the number of your readers if you didn't end the update there and would have written a bit more ?? 

Trust me its really really irritating and frustrating when you end every update like that.Its like intentionally snatching away the moment of peak excitement which the reader wants. He eventually have to ejaculate watching some porno or some other story just because you excited him but didn't let him finish off.You also know that you won't lose any reader if and a reader will always come back reading your story & you need to realise this by imagining yourself in readers' shoes and stop doing this petty thing. It's not some web series where you should end the episode with a plot that the user must come looking for next episode. Its an erotica and you should give something to a reader so that he feels happy at the end.
You can always take more time to write and give all the details which is the backbone of the story but at least give the reader a long update and the content they want and don't end the update like that.

Bro sorry to say that but its not like that....krish is right in his way of writing...
First, u have to understand the chemistry between the characters and their bonds sharing.
U only want sex so go somwhere else its, not your type of story...
Nd the up,s and down In these type of stories are great