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Incest Sulaghde Akhar - Mini Kahaniya (ਸੁਲਘਦੇ ਅੱਖਰ- ਮਿੰਨੀ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਸੰਗ੍ਰਹਿ)
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(20-07-2020, 09:37 PM)Bsjatt98 Wrote: [quote pid='2192652' dateline='1595148167']
ustaad gal sun app tusi kuj likhna bakia nal kau krde ida jehre likhde tahanu sama ohna nu motivate krna chahida ithe sarre enjoy krn aunde school ja clg da eassey thori tu galtia kadhn baith gya fuddu kam bc

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Motivate tan krde a. But as a reader story nu poori trh parhida. Na ki fast forward krke "very nice,  siraa, very good vrge comment kride. 

Agar kuj mistakes lgia tan das diti. And don't use bad words. Every reader has its own opinion.
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RE: Sulaghde Akhar - Mini Kahaniya (ਸੁਲਘਦੇ ਅੱਖਰ- ਮਿੰਨੀ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਸੰਗ੍ਰਹਿ) - by DRAGON WOLF - 20-07-2020, 10:04 PM



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