Incest Sulaghde Akhar - Mini Kahaniya (ਸੁਲਘਦੇ ਅੱਖਰ- ਮਿੰਨੀ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਸੰਗ੍ਰਹਿ)

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Don't mind but this story has few loopholes. Kuch galtian Hun.
1) Kis school ch roz red ya white suit pa ke jaa sakde? Har school da ik dress code hunda.

2) White suit ch black bra saaf disdi. Usdi maa ne v nahin rokeya? It's strange.

3) 8 baje inha hanera v nahin hunda ki koi nere aaye te chehra v na pata lage. Nale Jado Inna kuj kar gaya, usnu tan v usda chehra nazar nahin aaya. Eh v unrealistic hai.

Don't mind. I just tell them so that you may improve .

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ustaad gal sun app tusi kuj likhna bakia nal kau krde ida jehre likhde tahanu sama ohna nu motivate krna chahida ithe sarre enjoy krn aunde school ja clg da eassey thori tu galtia kadhn baith gya fuddu kam bc
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