Adultery A Wife's anxiety (Completed)
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(18-06-2020, 12:40 PM)game40it Wrote: I tried to portray the wife as someone who lurches in extremes of behaviour. Who let''s anger and emotions overrule good sense. She is headstrong, impulsive and even a little arrogant but who is also capable of intense feeling for someone.
I fully understood the character's characteristics and the behavior. I was just mentioning the mental status of a husband if he happens to see his beloved wife being fucked by some other male in front of his own eyes. 

Being a sex story of course there had to be scenes of sex that would be entertaining for the readers.
Bro...again you are on target. Yes we should have some sort of entertainment and the way you portrays the mating scenes its more realistic and very erotic. Keep it up.
Here I would have to take a little bit of license in how the characters in the story react. Generally people don't go to extremes but at the same time it is not unheard of either.
Yes boss, it is your story and you are at your liberty to give it the way you want. I never ever ask or request to change the plot or theme as it can make the writer to loose interest or the flair of writing. You go on your own way
Anyway I hope you would all enjoy this story. This was written in Tamil a few years back, way before my story My Wife, why did she betray me.
Yes, for sure I am savoring it. That is why I wrote my immediate feelings.
As I said earlier this was the first of three stories under a single thread, Three Short Stories.
I am eager to taste the remaining two also. 
Thank you in advance for giving such a beautiful, thoughtful and erotic stories.

Bro
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A Wife's anxiety (Completed) - by game40it - 29-05-2020, 09:15 PM
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