26-04-2020, 03:25 PM
(26-04-2020, 11:51 AM)Sabkabaap Wrote: Guys, ek request hai ki aap logon ko jaisa bhi lag raha ho, comment karke bata do. Ye story poori tarah meri soch hai, aur kahin se bhi copy paste nahi kar raha hun main. To aap logon ke reviews bahut jyada jaroori hain, ki mujhe ye story continue karni chahiye ya nahi, aur kis way mein aage bhadana chahiye. All reviews and comments are fully appreciated. THANK YOU
Bro tu puch raha h isliye bata rahi hu. Dekh Bhai aaj se pahley mene jo bhi tmkoc story padhi hai su. Mai bus ek he chiz Hoti h vo hai Jethalal au Babita ka sex bus isse aagey unki story Hoti he nahi. Ye chutiye tmkoc ke writer bus kuch bhi karke Jethalal ko hero bana dete hai jese baki koi to hai he nahi.ye chutiye kabhi bhi tmkoc mai koi story line nahi latey aur na he koi naye characters jisse story strong ho. inko to bus Jethalal aur Babita ka sex dikhana h aur jada se jada ye tapu ko add kar dege. Bro tu ye galti mat karna. Story mai ek story line honi chahiye.