Adultery My wife, why did she betray me (completed)

[manas]

Dear game40it

I was a bit disappointed with the previous update dated 30/12/2019.  

I thought you will never write anything directly with Prabhu POV. The readers will constantly be guessing. Thought provocation will make the story very interesting. The moment I saw the Prabhu POV, I expected same flow and presentation as of Meera POV. It appeared to me, you were in hurry to complete the story and hence taken the short cut method.

It does not require any imagination that Prabhu will not forget Meera. Even if it is not for amazing sex he got from Meera, the treatment he received after abandoned temple sex  and turn of events in his life will never allow him forget Meera in his lifetime.  There is so no surprise in his remembering Meera.

However, what I expected is that you will elaborate how Prabhu compared his sex life with his wife not only with Meera but also with his past sex partners. I really missing the feeling of Prabhu's physiological conflict. One side his unsatisfied sexual desire for Meera. On the other side the fear of being exposed to wife and in-laws. Constantly feeling the pain of being abandoned by parents.  And moreover his coward act of not informing Meera, the very reason of his sudden departure. His pain, his frustration, his un-satisfaction, his fear and his agony all are missing in his POV.

My only request is pl don't be in hurry. You have beautifully portrayed Meera. Same treatment I do expect to the other characters namely Prabhu and Saravana. This story is not 100 mtr sprint. The strong point of this story is psychological conflict of the characters built on ground reality. Sexual descriptions are spicy additives.

The repeated unprotected sex and fear of pregnancy could have been easily avoided, as Prabhu could easily arrange birth control pills or sufficient condoms from nearby cities. The first time obviously had to be unprotected sex. Meera character does not allow her desirous to get pregnant by Prabhu. By same reasons, Prabhu also will try his best not to make Meera pregnant willingly.

The dramatic end result is not very difficult to imagine. However I will refrain myself from doing so.

Wish you and all the readers a beautiful year.