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(01-06-2019, 11:40 AM)Smalldick Wrote: Fantastic update! Very very exciting and hot
(01-06-2019, 12:25 PM)TedBundy Wrote: amazing! amazing!! amazing and also mind blowing evil bro
wooooow too too hot, very very exciting update my dear!! phewwwwwwwww!!!
you are maintaining the rhythm the same as in the last update!
the way ganesh is using double meaning words are so much exciting and erotic.I have really got the extreme pleasure and the dick has raised the same way and it was unstoppable!:
(01-06-2019, 12:31 PM)3XXX Wrote: Awesome! Fantastic! superb! And super erotic double meaning conversation.You are really really incomparable evil bhai.Hats off to you.
(01-06-2019, 01:09 PM)Invisible Wrote: wow!wow! awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur ekdom faaduu update hai bhai,
(01-06-2019, 01:11 PM)Rajun Wrote: bahut badhiya update evil bhai,
aapki lekhani itni lajawab hai ki taarif ke liye shabd kam par rahe hai,
ye update itna erotic aur romanchak tha ki
mai bata nhi sakta,
(01-06-2019, 01:16 PM)Raju123 Wrote: vah evil bhai vah fantastic, mind blowing update, really mein MIND ko BLOW karne wala update hai bhai bahut bahut maja agaya.ji kar raha tha padhte hi jaun, kyun khatam ho gaya...magar khush hoon ke abhi ek aur hai
dekhte hai ki ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update bhai
(01-06-2019, 01:22 PM)KGB Wrote: bahut hi faadu aur lajawab update!age padhta hoon bhai bahut besabri hai..... aap ka likha padhne mein itna maja ata hai ke yadi aap lagaataar updatest post karate hain, to main unhen neend ke bina padh raha hoon
(01-06-2019, 01:54 PM)JHS19 Wrote: mast update! bahut faadu aur garam
(01-06-2019, 02:42 PM)Pinkboy Wrote: wah! wah! evil bhai kia likha hai bhai aap ne vah
jitna taarif karun kum hai....
yeh kahani itna majedaar hota jaa raha hai ke utsukta badhti jaa rahi hai
kamaal hai bhai kamal ka update hai maja agaya... baar baar padhne ke baad bhi mann nahin bhara hai mera
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(01-06-2019, 02:49 PM)SSM18 Wrote: bahut hi kamuk aur bahut hi lajawab update dhiya aapne evil bhai.eisi kahani likhna, eise soch dimaagh mein banana, eise haalat paida karna, eise character banana, eise rishte paida karna
yeh aap ke ilawa koyi nahin kar sakta hai evil bhai.
bahut sare kahaniyan ko padha hai magar koyi bhi kahani aap jeise nahin dekhi na mainne bahut see vayask kahaaniyaan padhee hain lekin yah kahaanee mujhe itana aanand de rahee hai jise main shabdon mein vyakt nahin kar sakata.
(01-06-2019, 02:53 PM)Savant Wrote: awesome update evil bhai, ekdum lajawab aur bahut hi masaladar update!bahut bahut maja aa gaya,bahut mast story likhte aap
(01-06-2019, 04:44 PM)shan123 Wrote: ekdom gajab update diya aapne evil bhai.bahut maza aya
(01-06-2019, 04:46 PM)SMJ20 Wrote: bahut khoob!ekdom jackhaass update
(01-06-2019, 04:50 PM)Shin54 Wrote: wah wah evil bhai, yeh to ek bahut hi mast aur zabardast update hai yaar.
mujhe bahut maja aya padhke,ekdom faadu update diya aap.
teen baar padha main ne... itna garam itna erotic aur sexy are baap re baap, aap to erotic likhne ki king ho evil bhai koyi nahin likhta eise yahan aap ke siwa...
bahut besbree se agla update ka intizaar
(01-06-2019, 05:48 PM)SlayeRaju Wrote: Congratz evil bro on 350 k views reach probably fastest to reach
(01-06-2019, 05:51 PM)SlayeRaju Wrote: There are other stories too on this forum but yours is apart from all
Just 3 days ago i saw 300k views on this story means 50k views in last 3 days!!! Just amazing hatsoff evil broo
(01-06-2019, 06:18 PM)Mandyforu Wrote: Bhai Ur best wrtiter in the world , slowly sex story mein twist Aur mainly seduce karna , har ek Masale ko correct dala hai apne , ap film director hona chaiye
(01-06-2019, 07:41 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Congratulations bhai.. Within a week or two, this story is going to ranked as no.1 most viewed story.
(01-06-2019, 07:49 PM)Introvert Wrote: Very very hot and exciting update.This story is really extremely pleasurable and 100% dick hardening story.I will be extremely happy if I can get a new update daily though it is not possible.I hope next update will come soon.
Thank you guys.
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(01-06-2019, 07:51 PM)BlackHorse Wrote: Lajawab aur ekdom faaduu update! bahut maza aya evil bhai
(01-06-2019, 08:22 PM)Rafiqaskhani586 Wrote: Superb update waiting for next update
(01-06-2019, 09:23 PM)neha2 Wrote: Very hot
(01-06-2019, 10:03 PM)Intruder Wrote: bahut hi mast update!bahut hot aur kamuk update.agla update ke lie intizar
(01-06-2019, 10:13 PM)Bonita Wrote: bahut badhiya update!bahut hi majedar aur faadu update diya app evil bhai
(01-06-2019, 10:17 PM)Pandora Wrote: kya ek gajab update diya bhai aap!bahut hi hot aur sexy
(01-06-2019, 10:20 PM)Erika Wrote: superb update! ekdom lajawab bhai.double meaning ke batcheet bahut hi kamuk aur uttejit karanevaala
(01-06-2019, 10:24 PM)Kinkyboy Wrote: what a super duper hit and dick basting update.ekdom faaduu
(01-06-2019, 10:27 PM)Rocky69 Wrote: ekdum kamaal kar diya aap to mujhe evill bhai.bahut hi spicy update.keep going buddy.
(01-06-2019, 10:30 PM)Raghu Wrote: itana badhiya update!ekdom full masti aya bhai
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(01-06-2019, 10:36 PM)Rahul007 Wrote: WOW! Evil bhai,wonderful,awesome and amazing update! You are really rocking this forum.
(01-06-2019, 10:38 PM)Kartik69 Wrote: bahut hi hot,bahut hi kamuk aur bahut majedar update.
(02-06-2019, 01:40 AM)Tequila Wrote: bahut bahut badhiya update! ekdom lajawab aur bahut khoob
(02-06-2019, 01:58 AM)Little Clown Wrote: bahut hi mast aur bahut hi majedar update hai bhai, bahut hi kamuk aur tagda conversation chal rahe hai
(02-06-2019, 02:43 AM)QueenBee Wrote: best of the best update evil bhai
bahut bahut hi majedar, bahut passand aya yeh update mujhe
behad hi shaandaar likhe ho aap ne
ekdun faadu update hai yeh.agla update ke lie besabree se intizaar
(02-06-2019, 02:50 AM)WickedWitch Wrote: bahut hi majedar update!yah kahaanee din par din behad garam aur kaamuk hotee ja rahee hai
(02-06-2019, 03:59 AM)Nigar99 Wrote: Awesome update .... Waiting for next update...
Thank you guys.
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(02-06-2019, 01:32 PM)Caesar Wrote: Bahut hi gajab update! Agla update ke lie besabree se intizar
(02-06-2019, 01:36 PM)Fabian Wrote: Extremely hot and erotic update. Bahut maza aya padhne ko
(02-06-2019, 01:39 PM)Hannibal Wrote: Awesome,fantastic,stunning and very very exciting update
(02-06-2019, 01:41 PM)TomHagen Wrote: Very very hot and erotic update. Waiting very eagerly for the next update
(02-06-2019, 01:58 PM)Snake Eyes Wrote: Wah! Wah! Itana hot kahaani! Extremely exciting and erotic
(02-06-2019, 02:49 PM)Snake Eyes Wrote: Wah! Bahut badhiya kahaani! Bahut bahut hot aur kamuk kahaani. Agla update jaldi se dijiye bhai
(02-06-2019, 05:01 PM)Bentley Wrote: Super hot and exciting update
(02-06-2019, 05:04 PM)Romi Wrote: Bahut badhiya update! Bahut hi acacha aur gajab update
(03-06-2019, 04:02 AM)Bad bitch Wrote: Bahut badhiya kahaani! Awesome,fantastic and wonderful story evil bhai.
behad hi hot aur erotic.bhai aapki writing skills ka to jawab nahi hai,
aapka Dialogue delivery itna perfect hota hai ki mai bata nhi sakta,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,Waiting for next update
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(02-06-2019, 02:44 PM)Pappu pelu Wrote: Evil bhai...there is a request, you should write a English story. You are a very good writer.
Well thank you, maybe oneday i will.
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Agle update ka intezar hai bhai...Jald se jald update dena please....
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Savage, Wow! You guys are just amazing. I cannot express how happy i'm with all the replies you guys been giving ever since i gave last update. Trust me, thats all a writer wishes for that people like his/her story, Irrespective of how good or bad the content is. Thank you so much everyone. Now tonight's update will come around 22:30 PM IST. Stay tuned.
Thank you
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waiting for night dhamaka
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(03-06-2019, 08:55 PM)THE EVIL Wrote: Savage, Wow! You guys are just amazing. I cannot express how happy i'm with all the replies you guys been giving ever since i gave last update. Trust me, thats all a writer wishes for that people like his/her story, Irrespective of how good or bad the content is. Thank you so much everyone. Now tonight's update will come around 22:30 PM IST. Stay tuned.
Thank you
You are really amazing and your story running is also amazing.
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(03-06-2019, 08:55 PM)THE EVIL Wrote: Savage, Wow! You guys are just amazing. I cannot express how happy i'm with all the replies you guys been giving ever since i gave last update. Trust me, thats all a writer wishes for that people like his/her story, Irrespective of how good or bad the content is. Thank you so much everyone. Now tonight's update will come around 22:30 PM IST. Stay tuned.
Thank you
Aapka update tha hi aisa jo kisi ko bhi hila de.... As I calculated, there were 95+ replies you received after last update. Thats huge btw.
Congratulations for being the writer of 1st and 2nd most read stories on the forum.
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Sorry guys, update will be half n hour late now because my lappy is having an issue. Will give the update as soon as i fix it. But update will definatly come tonight, dont worry about that.
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Evil bro AAP kahani bhut hi jabarjast hai please ISS kahani Ko continue rakhna bro
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Evilbhai please update...............
Unable to wait.................
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Bhai kya England aur Pakistan ka match dekh rhe
[i] ho /i]
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Kya gajab ka scene creat hua bhai..
Malkin chair par baithi aur naukar petticoat k andar choot chat raha h..
Samne nand baithi h aur side m naukar ki biwi khana bana rahi h..
Jabardast
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1. Jism Fir Se badki Aag.
2. Naukar se Sukh.
3. गुरुजी के आश्रम में रश्मि के जलवे.
4. Karan Chacha.
5. Ufff Zalim Dhire se.
6. Anita Singh.
Meri request hai ki ye saari story koi complete kar de please
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